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一、相关短语
1. shopping mall 大型购物中心
2. be considered as 被认为是
3. entertainment center 娱乐中心
4. be opened 开张;开业
5. department store 百货商店
6. health club 健康俱乐部
7. with / cover a total area of... 总面积有…
8. Shopping Festival 购物节
9. special discount特别折扣
10. delivery company 快递公司
11. value of goods 商品价值
12. shopping website 购物网站
13. total income 总收入
14. brand-new 崭新的
15. online shopping 网上购物
16. gain popularity 备受青睐
17. relative law 有关法律
18. online security 网络安全
19. privacy and security policy隐私和安全政策
20. personal detail 个人信息
21. shopping addiction 购物成瘾;购物狂
22. negative effect 负面影响
23. financial problem 经济困境
24. mental and emotional difficulty心理和情感上的困境
25. over-consumption 过度消费
26. budget your cash 做好现金预算
27. make purchase 购买(东西)
二、必备句子
1. Huaxiang Shopping Mall, an indoor shopping and entertainment center, is considered as a shoppers’ paradise.华翔购物商场是一个大型室内购物和娱乐中心,是购物者天堂。
2. When the construction is completed, the shopping mall will cover a total area of 57,000 square meters, making it the largest shopping center of the city.建成后,该商场占地5.7万平方米,将成为该市最大的购物中心。
3. It is a holiday on which young people shop online with various special discounts and celebrate being single.这是一个年轻人进行网上打折购物和庆祝单身的节日。
4. Apparently, online shopping has its advantages, the biggest of which is convenience. 显然,网上购物有它自己的优势所在,而最大的好处就是便利。
5. With the growth of online shopping, it is of great urgency that relative laws should be formulated to ensure online security.随着网上购物的增长,制定相关法律法规以确保网络安全也迫在眉睫。
6. To solve this problem, I recommend that the following effective solutions be taken.为解决这个问题,我建议采取以下有效措施。
三、典型例题
例题一:基础写作
假定你是李华,暑假在一家新开张的购物商城“华翔购物中心”担任兼职介绍员。
[写作内容]
请你为购物商城开张活动写一篇英文介绍,要点包括:
商场名称:华翔购物中心
目标定位:大型室内购物和娱乐中心,购物者天堂
开张时间:2014年11月27日
商城功能:(1)设有百货公司;
(2)数百家商店、餐厅、电影院和银行;
(3)多家健身俱乐部。
建筑风格:雕塑(sculpture)、喷泉和热带园林的设计为商城增添了奢华感
前景展望:完全建成后,占地5.7万平方米,将成为该市最大的购物中心
Welcome to Huaxiang Shopping Mall! ...
[过程指导]
第一步,认真审题。
1. 审文体:介绍购物中心,属说明文。
2. 审时态:因商场尚未完全建成,故以__________为主。
3. 审人称:以第______人称为主。
4. 审要点:看清框内信息,不漏掉信息,以便分组规划。
第二步,信息分组。
根据各信息点之间的逻辑顺序等将信息点分为5组,以便用5个句子来表达。(在题中用笔圈出即可) 第三步,信息表达。
以上每组信息点用一个英语句子来表达,必要时添加恰当的主语等成分,使句子结构完整。
第四步,连句成篇。
将以上5个句子合并成一篇连贯的短文,必要时添加适当的过渡衔接词。
第五步,检查核对。
例题二:读写任务
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The shopping frenzy(购物热潮)is kicking off once again in China. With the Spring Festival holidays and the Chinese Year of the Snake right around the corner, everybody in the country seems to be on a shopping carnival, especially online. E-commerce websites are tempting buyers with sweet promotions. So far, traditional Chinese pastries and biscuits top the list of most popular items purchased.
Normally at this time of year customers would be rushing to markets and supermarkets to do their festival shopping. But compared to previous years, supermarket shopping has not increased all that much.
Everyone’s favorite shopping spot in China seems to have changed. Earlier this month online retailer(零售商) Taobao hosted an online fair for the upcoming Spring Festival. During the fair’s seven days, 4.8 million people placed orders, 4.5 million of them purchasing food and snacks. Total spending was more than one billion yuan. Internet festival shopping offers cheaper prices and more choices, and takes less time.
A customer said,“Online shopping is very convenient. I don’t have to keep running to the shops. It is more cost efficient.”
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2. 以约120个词谈谈你对网上购物的看法,内容包括:
(1)你对网上购物现象的理解;
(2)你认为网上购物有何优缺点,请举例说明;
(3)出于安全购物的考虑,你对网上购物有何建议。
[过程指导]
写概要
1. 分析文体类别:阅读材料新闻,第一段为导语,指出主要事件,随着春节到来,中学掀起购物热潮,特别是网上购物;第二段讲传统购物与以前相比增长不大;第三四段讲网上购物人多及其原因。
2. 找出关键词句:写概要前,应在文中找出并标明以下关键句或关键词:
新闻要旨: (第一段)
实体商场销售情况: (第二段)
网上购物情况及原因: (第三、四段)
3. 组合关键词句:
谈看法
要点⑴:可以说随着网络的发展,网购是崭新的购物方式,受到越来越多人的欢迎。
要点⑵:可先谈优点,如方便、快捷、享受打折;再谈缺点,不安全、购回的货物不令人满意。
要点⑶:首先建议政府建立相关法律,其次建议网购者阅读隐私和安全政策,并使用第三方服务。
根据以上提示,完成自已的写作:
四、模拟演练
练习一:基础写作
你是某报编辑,应邀为一个网站写一篇关于“双十一购物节”的英文介绍。
[写作内容]
节日名称:双十一购物节,中国的“光棍节
举办日期:每年11月11日
节日意义:庆祝单身,打折购物
节日由来:五年前由购物网站Alibaba开始推广,现已成为国内网络经销商、数百万网购爱好者和上千家快递公司最繁忙的日子
网商收益:上一年度阿里巴巴主要的两家网络商城--TaoBao和Tmall的产品总销售额达到1千亿元,超过了Amazon和eBay两家公司去年总收入的总和
参考词汇:光棍节Single’s Day快递公司delivery company
练习二:读写任务
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
In trying to keep up with the Jones (赶时髦), many people buy more than they can really afford. For some who purchase many items they neither need nor use, however, there is more than merely trying to keep up with the Jones going on. These people are addicted to going to malls and buying things they don’t really need. They spend a lot of time juggling (歪曲) accounts and bills to be able to continue to shop for more things and lie to others about the amount of shopping done and the amount of money spent.
Compulsive shopping is the uncontrollable desire to purchase items. In a society that celebrates spending and credit, this behavior is usually looked upon as a joke rather than a serious problem.
However, studies indicate that as many as 1 in 12 people in the United States suffer from shopaholism (购物狂症) with 80%-90% of those suffering from it being women. The typical compulsive buyer is a woman in her early to mid-30s who has a number of credit cards and whose family earns a low to middle income.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2. 以约120个词谈谈你对“强迫性消费”的看法,内容包括:
(1)你身边存在的“强迫性消费”现象;
(2)你认为“强迫性消费”有何危害;
(3)对“强迫性消费”问题提出你的建议。
(作者单位:华南师范大学附属中学汕尾校区)
1. shopping mall 大型购物中心
2. be considered as 被认为是
3. entertainment center 娱乐中心
4. be opened 开张;开业
5. department store 百货商店
6. health club 健康俱乐部
7. with / cover a total area of... 总面积有…
8. Shopping Festival 购物节
9. special discount特别折扣
10. delivery company 快递公司
11. value of goods 商品价值
12. shopping website 购物网站
13. total income 总收入
14. brand-new 崭新的
15. online shopping 网上购物
16. gain popularity 备受青睐
17. relative law 有关法律
18. online security 网络安全
19. privacy and security policy隐私和安全政策
20. personal detail 个人信息
21. shopping addiction 购物成瘾;购物狂
22. negative effect 负面影响
23. financial problem 经济困境
24. mental and emotional difficulty心理和情感上的困境
25. over-consumption 过度消费
26. budget your cash 做好现金预算
27. make purchase 购买(东西)
二、必备句子
1. Huaxiang Shopping Mall, an indoor shopping and entertainment center, is considered as a shoppers’ paradise.华翔购物商场是一个大型室内购物和娱乐中心,是购物者天堂。
2. When the construction is completed, the shopping mall will cover a total area of 57,000 square meters, making it the largest shopping center of the city.建成后,该商场占地5.7万平方米,将成为该市最大的购物中心。
3. It is a holiday on which young people shop online with various special discounts and celebrate being single.这是一个年轻人进行网上打折购物和庆祝单身的节日。
4. Apparently, online shopping has its advantages, the biggest of which is convenience. 显然,网上购物有它自己的优势所在,而最大的好处就是便利。
5. With the growth of online shopping, it is of great urgency that relative laws should be formulated to ensure online security.随着网上购物的增长,制定相关法律法规以确保网络安全也迫在眉睫。
6. To solve this problem, I recommend that the following effective solutions be taken.为解决这个问题,我建议采取以下有效措施。
三、典型例题
例题一:基础写作
假定你是李华,暑假在一家新开张的购物商城“华翔购物中心”担任兼职介绍员。
[写作内容]
请你为购物商城开张活动写一篇英文介绍,要点包括:
商场名称:华翔购物中心
目标定位:大型室内购物和娱乐中心,购物者天堂
开张时间:2014年11月27日
商城功能:(1)设有百货公司;
(2)数百家商店、餐厅、电影院和银行;
(3)多家健身俱乐部。
建筑风格:雕塑(sculpture)、喷泉和热带园林的设计为商城增添了奢华感
前景展望:完全建成后,占地5.7万平方米,将成为该市最大的购物中心
Welcome to Huaxiang Shopping Mall! ...
[过程指导]
第一步,认真审题。
1. 审文体:介绍购物中心,属说明文。
2. 审时态:因商场尚未完全建成,故以__________为主。
3. 审人称:以第______人称为主。
4. 审要点:看清框内信息,不漏掉信息,以便分组规划。
第二步,信息分组。
根据各信息点之间的逻辑顺序等将信息点分为5组,以便用5个句子来表达。(在题中用笔圈出即可) 第三步,信息表达。
以上每组信息点用一个英语句子来表达,必要时添加恰当的主语等成分,使句子结构完整。
第四步,连句成篇。
将以上5个句子合并成一篇连贯的短文,必要时添加适当的过渡衔接词。
第五步,检查核对。
例题二:读写任务
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The shopping frenzy(购物热潮)is kicking off once again in China. With the Spring Festival holidays and the Chinese Year of the Snake right around the corner, everybody in the country seems to be on a shopping carnival, especially online. E-commerce websites are tempting buyers with sweet promotions. So far, traditional Chinese pastries and biscuits top the list of most popular items purchased.
Normally at this time of year customers would be rushing to markets and supermarkets to do their festival shopping. But compared to previous years, supermarket shopping has not increased all that much.
Everyone’s favorite shopping spot in China seems to have changed. Earlier this month online retailer(零售商) Taobao hosted an online fair for the upcoming Spring Festival. During the fair’s seven days, 4.8 million people placed orders, 4.5 million of them purchasing food and snacks. Total spending was more than one billion yuan. Internet festival shopping offers cheaper prices and more choices, and takes less time.
A customer said,“Online shopping is very convenient. I don’t have to keep running to the shops. It is more cost efficient.”
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2. 以约120个词谈谈你对网上购物的看法,内容包括:
(1)你对网上购物现象的理解;
(2)你认为网上购物有何优缺点,请举例说明;
(3)出于安全购物的考虑,你对网上购物有何建议。
[过程指导]
写概要
1. 分析文体类别:阅读材料新闻,第一段为导语,指出主要事件,随着春节到来,中学掀起购物热潮,特别是网上购物;第二段讲传统购物与以前相比增长不大;第三四段讲网上购物人多及其原因。
2. 找出关键词句:写概要前,应在文中找出并标明以下关键句或关键词:
新闻要旨: (第一段)
实体商场销售情况: (第二段)
网上购物情况及原因: (第三、四段)
3. 组合关键词句:
谈看法
要点⑴:可以说随着网络的发展,网购是崭新的购物方式,受到越来越多人的欢迎。
要点⑵:可先谈优点,如方便、快捷、享受打折;再谈缺点,不安全、购回的货物不令人满意。
要点⑶:首先建议政府建立相关法律,其次建议网购者阅读隐私和安全政策,并使用第三方服务。
根据以上提示,完成自已的写作:
四、模拟演练
练习一:基础写作
你是某报编辑,应邀为一个网站写一篇关于“双十一购物节”的英文介绍。
[写作内容]
节日名称:双十一购物节,中国的“光棍节
举办日期:每年11月11日
节日意义:庆祝单身,打折购物
节日由来:五年前由购物网站Alibaba开始推广,现已成为国内网络经销商、数百万网购爱好者和上千家快递公司最繁忙的日子
网商收益:上一年度阿里巴巴主要的两家网络商城--TaoBao和Tmall的产品总销售额达到1千亿元,超过了Amazon和eBay两家公司去年总收入的总和
参考词汇:光棍节Single’s Day快递公司delivery company
练习二:读写任务
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
In trying to keep up with the Jones (赶时髦), many people buy more than they can really afford. For some who purchase many items they neither need nor use, however, there is more than merely trying to keep up with the Jones going on. These people are addicted to going to malls and buying things they don’t really need. They spend a lot of time juggling (歪曲) accounts and bills to be able to continue to shop for more things and lie to others about the amount of shopping done and the amount of money spent.
Compulsive shopping is the uncontrollable desire to purchase items. In a society that celebrates spending and credit, this behavior is usually looked upon as a joke rather than a serious problem.
However, studies indicate that as many as 1 in 12 people in the United States suffer from shopaholism (购物狂症) with 80%-90% of those suffering from it being women. The typical compulsive buyer is a woman in her early to mid-30s who has a number of credit cards and whose family earns a low to middle income.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2. 以约120个词谈谈你对“强迫性消费”的看法,内容包括:
(1)你身边存在的“强迫性消费”现象;
(2)你认为“强迫性消费”有何危害;
(3)对“强迫性消费”问题提出你的建议。
(作者单位:华南师范大学附属中学汕尾校区)