从小学到初中的作文课,至少有百分之八十以上的时间用于记叙文写作的训练,但大多数同学的记叙文写来写去总是空洞无物,不能给人以如临其境、如见其人、如历其事的感觉,更无感染力可言。究其原因,最主要的就是同学们在写人记事时,离开了时间、离开了空间,没有特定的情景描写,没有传神的人物肖像、神态、动作等描写,只是空泛的叙述,作文者写得情同榨油,批阅者读着味如嚼蜡。怎样才能将记叙文写得别人喜欢读呢?笔 At least 80% of the composition lessons from elementary school to junior high school are used for the training of narrative writing. However, most of the students’ narrative writing is always empty and can not give people the impression that they are on the ground. Seeing the feelings of their people and events is even less appealing. The main reason for this is that the students have left the time and left the space when they write the notes. There are no specific scenes to describe, there are no vivid depictions of portraiture, demeanor, and movement. They are merely narratives. The writer writes. The oil is squeezed and the reviewer reads the taste. How can I write narratives that others like to read?