认真品读各地教师的今年全国课标Ⅰ卷下水作文,发现很多老师都使用了第二人称来写作。我认为,第二人称非常好地体现了读者意识,针对性极强。一、忽视“读者”有缺失在材料中的12个关键词中,我们都能从中赞颂中国,表达我们“所认识的中国”。但是,仅仅赞颂祖国或者仅仅顾及自己,而不注意特定的读者对象,则有很大的缺失。在写作要求中,“写一篇文章帮助外国青年读懂 Seriously reading teachers across the country this year, I Volume Lao Ziwen, found that many teachers have used the second person to write. I think, the second person is very good to reflect the readers awareness, highly targeted. I. Ignoring ”Readers “ Lacking Of the 12 key words in the material, we can all praise China and express our understanding of China. However, there is a great lack of mere praise for the motherland or mere consideration of oneself without paying attention to a specific audience of readers. Writing requirements, ”write an article to help foreign young people read