《小学青年教师》2004年第9期刊登的《对课文〈红旗渠〉的几点修改建议》一文,作者原绿色在肯定“《红旗渠》一文入选课本意义是多方面的”同时,提出了修改的四点建议。作为教材的使用者,在此我们也谈几点自己的看法:1.“林县”无须改为“林州市”。正如作者所说“如果确实需要 “The primary school young teachers,” No. 9, 2004, published “on the text” Hongqiqu several amendments to the proposal, “the author of the original green in the affirmation” “Hongqiqu” selected textbook is multifaceted meaning “at the same time, put forward Modified four suggestions. As a textbook user, here we also talk about their own views: 1. ”Linxian“ need not be changed to ”Linzhou City.“ As the author put it, ”If you really need it