晏同叔蝶恋花:‘槛菊愁烟兰泣露,罗幙轻寒,燕子双飞去。明月不谙离恨苦,斜光到晓穿朱户。昨夜西风凋碧树,独上高楼,望尽天涯路。欲寄彩笺兼尺素,山长水涧知何处。’按:宋杜安世端正好云:‘槛菊愁烟沾秋露。天微冷、双燕辞去。月明空照别离苦。透素光、穿朱户。夜来西风雕寒树。凭阑望、迢遥长路。花笺写就此情绪。特寄传、知何处。’此词,直是晏词改写,而寡薄少味,与原作相比,何啻仙凡,真贴金成铁也。 Yan Tong Shu butterflies with flowers: ’Ching Chrysanthemum smoke blue weeping dew, Luo curtain cold, swallow fly. Mingyue not familiar with hate, diagonally to wear Zhuo know. Westerly withered Bristol last night, alone on the high-rise, Wandering End of the World Road. To send color memo and size, mountain long stream Jianzhi where. ’Press: Song Du An end just clouds:’ Ju Chrysanthemum smoke soaked autumn. Days cold, Shuangyan resigned. Moonlight air farewell from bitter. Through the light, wear Zhuo. Night westerly sculptures cold trees. With vision, long way to go. I write this emotion. Special send pass, where know. ’This word is straight Yan words rewritten, and oligospermia less, compared with the original, He 啻 xian where, really paste gold into iron also.