经过前面的学习,学生已经确定了自己要写的内容,积累了素材,本节课重点根据所列举的提纲和积累的素材完成习作初稿。一、依据所列提纲,交流重点观察的景物在写景类文章中,把景物内容写具体是一个难点,所以在教学中需要教师对学生进行重点指导。师:“顺着阶梯攀登约两百米来到了山顶。”这时,你看到了什么? After the previous study, the students have determined what they want to write and have accumulated the material. This lesson focuses on the first draft of the exercises based on the outline and accumulated materials listed. First, according to the listed outline, the exchange of key observations in the scene to write the scenery class article, write the content of the scene is a specific difficulty, so in teaching teachers need to focus on guidance to students. Teacher: “We climbed the ladder about 200 meters to the summit.” "What did you see at this moment?