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此文有三个独特的材料,既议“负重意义”,又议“负重有度”。本文还需要升格,升格的措施是:从“负重意义”“负重有度”两者中选择其一作为主旨,舍弃无关的材料,围绕主旨补充独特材料。作文标题改为“负重”——宽题窄做。
This article has three unique materials, both “negative weight” and “heavy weight.” This article also needs to be upgraded. The measures for promotion are: Select one of the following as the main theme: “Loading Significance” and “Loading and Exerting”. Abandon unrelated materials and supplement unique materials around the subject. The title of the composition was changed to “Loading” - narrow questions were narrowed.