这是一篇很不错的小学生习作,小作者有一定的文学功底,很会“设计”作文。首先,他的作文题目就很“抓”眼:《四季窗帘梦》,一个“梦”字就给人一种幻想的余地,一种飘渺的美感,使人心里产生好奇,急于想知道其中的奥秘,这一点,小作者成功了!再从整个故事来看,结构清晰,毫无拖沓(t This is a very good primary school students work, young writers have a certain literary skills, it will “design” composition. First of all, his essay topic is very “catch” the eye: “Four Seasons curtain dream”, a “dream” word gives a room for an illusion, a misty beauty, people curious, eager to want to know one of them Mystery, this, the success of the little author! Again from the entire story point of view, the structure is clear, no procrastination (t