我的梦很傻,只想要个同龄人评我的诗。我的梦可没有十几年的历史,只是在喝着茶读着《中文自修》的时候,忽然心血来潮,暗暗地希望肖未能为我评诗。初识肖未的笔墨,是在1996年11月18日《新民晚报》上,报上登的是肖未的两首诗:《三朵黄玫瑰》与《午后》。当时就奇怪,她的诗里怎么会有这么多玻璃窗,好像她 My dream is stupid, I just want a peer review my poem. My dream can be no more than ten years of history, just drinking tea reading “Chinese self-study”, suddenly whim, secretly hope Xiao failed to comment on poetry for me. The first reading of Xiao Wei’s ink and calligraphy was published on Xinmin Evening News on November 18, 1996. The two poems of Shaw before him were “Three Yellow Roses” and “Afternoon.” It was strange at that time how there were so many windows in her poetry, like her