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一、命题预测
命题人可能要求考生写一篇关于大学、未来的理想职业及读书等爱好的文章，以及改进身边事物的愿望的建议信。
二、常用短语
1. mean/plan/intend to do 打算做某事
2. be determined to do sth. 决定做某事
3. make up one’s mind to do sth. 决定做某事
4. pursue /realize one’s dream追逐/实现梦想
5. lose the passion for sth. 失去对……的激情
6. enrich one’s life丰富生活
7. broaden one’s horizons 开拓视野
8. do voluntary work 做义务劳动
9. meet the challenge 迎接挑战
10. meet the needs of 满足……的需要
11. make preparations for 为……做准备
12. get ready for 为……做准备
13. seize the opportunity to do sth. 抓住机会做某事
14. contribute to /make a contribution to 为……做贡献
15. inspire sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事
16. be reluctant to do sth. 不情愿做某事
三、套用句式
1. They played such a crucial role in curing patients that I made up my mind to become a doctor. 他们在治疗病人时扮演了如此重要的角色以至于我下定决心成为一名医生。
2. I hold the belief that my hard work will lay a solid foundation for my ideal future.我坚信，我的努力将会为我的理想的未来奠定坚实的基础。
3. To pursue my dream， I will spare no effort to go to Zhongshan University. 为了追逐我的梦想，我将不遗余力，努力进入中山大学。
4. It is not what we have but what we can do for others that makes life meaningful. 使生命有意义的不是我们拥有的东西，而是我们能为别人做什么。
5. Only in this way can we have a meaningful life. 只有用这个方法，我们才能拥有有意义的人生。
四、习作修改
Dear Mr. Headmaster，
I am Li Yue， a student from Class 1， Senior 2. I am writing to draw your attention for some proper behaviour among us students： littering and scribbling（乱涂）. In a fact， it makes our school dirty and unpleasant， does harm to the image of our school. I always feel shameful whenever I see this. It is not appropriately for a student to litter and scribble about.
I wonder if the school could place more dustbin around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time， students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave yourselves. I firm believe that， with the joint efforts of both teachers and students， our school becomes a more enjoyable place in the near future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully，
Li Yue
五、课堂练习
假定你是光明中学的高三学生李华，你的父母希望你按照他们的规划选大学和专业。请你以“My ideal Future”为题给他们写一封信。主要内容包括：
1. 理想的大学和专业。
2. 选择此专业的原因。
3. 打算怎么做。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mum and Dad，
Since I was young， I have dreamed of...
…
Yours faithfully， Li Hua
【过程指导】
第一步，认真审题。
1. 审文体：本文属于陈述观点的文章。
2. 审时态：这个关于大学和未来理想职业的文章的时态比较复杂，“理想”是小时候形成的，用一般过去时。“选择此专业的原因”，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。后面的做法和决心以一般将来时为主。
3. 审人称：以第一、三人称为主。
4. 审要点：注意写作的3个要点和背景介绍。
第二步，确定结构。
1. 第一段：理想的大学，专业。
2. 第二段：选择此专业的原因。
3. 第三段：打算怎么做。
第三步，确定内容。
对于题目要求的内容要点，要增加细节，写得具体。如：选择学医，其理由可以是：
（1）儿时目睹医生救人，很感动。
（2）社会对医生的需求量在增加。
第三段：陈述自己将要怎么做，并争取父母的支持。
第四步，翻译表达。
第五步，检查核对。
第六步，规范誊写。
六、课外作业
假定你是学生李华，请以the meaning of life为题给迷茫的弟弟写封信，内容要点包括：
1. 人生的意义。
2. 原因。
3. 我的做法。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
3. 开头、结语已为你写好。
Dear Brother，
…
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
参考答案与范文
四、习作修改
本文是高中生写给校长的一封信，反映了校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为，并提出建议措施，使校园恢复美丽。
1. for →to 词组draw one’s attention to...把某人的注意力吸引到。
2. proper→improper 由句子意思可知，乱扔垃圾，乱涂是“不合适”的行为。
3. 去掉a 词组：in fact（实际上）。
4. does→doing 句子已经有谓语makes，does应改为非谓语doing，表伴随或结果； 或者在does前加and，将 makes和does并列起来。
5. shameful→ashamed 表示“感到羞愧的”。
6. appropriately→appropriate 作表语要用形容词。
7. dustbin→dustbins，垃圾桶是可数名词。
8. yourselves→themselves 人称要一致，主语是students，反身代词是themselves。
9. firm→firmly 修饰动词believe，用副词firmly“坚定地”。
10. becomes→will become 时间是in the near future，用将来时。
五、课堂练习
Dear Mum and Dad，
Since I was young， I have dreamed of becoming a doctor. To pursue my dream， I will spare no effort to go to Zhongshan University， which is famous for medical research.
Why do I want to be a doctor？ When I was in hospital many years ago， a doctor worked for a long time to save a baby’s life， which moved me deeply. Besides， it is said that there is increasing demand for them. I want to be a doctor to meet the needs of people.
My dream inspires me to take action. I will make full use of my time and work hard at all subjects. To improve my practical skills， I will devote myself to biological experiment. I hold the belief that my hard work will lay a solid foundation for my ideal future. I will appreciate it if you can trust me and support my choice.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
六、课外作业
Dear brother，
It seems that you lose the passion for life. I am writing to share with you my understanding of the meaning of life.
What’s the meaning of life？ Life means living well and helping others live well. It is not what we have but what we can do for others that makes life meaningful.
When we are young， our parents take good care of us. When we are faced with difficulties， our friends help us and encourage us not to lose heart. Thanks to them， we have a better life. In return， when they are in need， we should solve the problems for them. Besides， it is giving that gives us happiness， a sense of satisfaction.
In our spare time， we should do voluntary work， such as planting trees， donating used clothes and so on. I will seize the opportunity to help others. By making a contribution to the society， we can make a difference. Only in this way can we have a meaningful life.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
（作者单位：广东深圳市松岗中学）
责任编辑 蒋小青
命题人可能要求考生写一篇关于大学、未来的理想职业及读书等爱好的文章，以及改进身边事物的愿望的建议信。
二、常用短语
1. mean/plan/intend to do 打算做某事
2. be determined to do sth. 决定做某事
3. make up one’s mind to do sth. 决定做某事
4. pursue /realize one’s dream追逐/实现梦想
5. lose the passion for sth. 失去对……的激情
6. enrich one’s life丰富生活
7. broaden one’s horizons 开拓视野
8. do voluntary work 做义务劳动
9. meet the challenge 迎接挑战
10. meet the needs of 满足……的需要
11. make preparations for 为……做准备
12. get ready for 为……做准备
13. seize the opportunity to do sth. 抓住机会做某事
14. contribute to /make a contribution to 为……做贡献
15. inspire sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事
16. be reluctant to do sth. 不情愿做某事
三、套用句式
1. They played such a crucial role in curing patients that I made up my mind to become a doctor. 他们在治疗病人时扮演了如此重要的角色以至于我下定决心成为一名医生。
2. I hold the belief that my hard work will lay a solid foundation for my ideal future.我坚信，我的努力将会为我的理想的未来奠定坚实的基础。
3. To pursue my dream， I will spare no effort to go to Zhongshan University. 为了追逐我的梦想，我将不遗余力，努力进入中山大学。
4. It is not what we have but what we can do for others that makes life meaningful. 使生命有意义的不是我们拥有的东西，而是我们能为别人做什么。
5. Only in this way can we have a meaningful life. 只有用这个方法，我们才能拥有有意义的人生。
四、习作修改
Dear Mr. Headmaster，
I am Li Yue， a student from Class 1， Senior 2. I am writing to draw your attention for some proper behaviour among us students： littering and scribbling（乱涂）. In a fact， it makes our school dirty and unpleasant， does harm to the image of our school. I always feel shameful whenever I see this. It is not appropriately for a student to litter and scribble about.
I wonder if the school could place more dustbin around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time， students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave yourselves. I firm believe that， with the joint efforts of both teachers and students， our school becomes a more enjoyable place in the near future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully，
Li Yue
五、课堂练习
假定你是光明中学的高三学生李华，你的父母希望你按照他们的规划选大学和专业。请你以“My ideal Future”为题给他们写一封信。主要内容包括：
1. 理想的大学和专业。
2. 选择此专业的原因。
3. 打算怎么做。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mum and Dad，
Since I was young， I have dreamed of...
…
Yours faithfully， Li Hua
【过程指导】
第一步，认真审题。
1. 审文体：本文属于陈述观点的文章。
2. 审时态：这个关于大学和未来理想职业的文章的时态比较复杂，“理想”是小时候形成的，用一般过去时。“选择此专业的原因”，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。后面的做法和决心以一般将来时为主。
3. 审人称：以第一、三人称为主。
4. 审要点：注意写作的3个要点和背景介绍。
第二步，确定结构。
1. 第一段：理想的大学，专业。
2. 第二段：选择此专业的原因。
3. 第三段：打算怎么做。
第三步，确定内容。
对于题目要求的内容要点，要增加细节，写得具体。如：选择学医，其理由可以是：
（1）儿时目睹医生救人，很感动。
（2）社会对医生的需求量在增加。
第三段：陈述自己将要怎么做，并争取父母的支持。
第四步，翻译表达。
第五步，检查核对。
第六步，规范誊写。
六、课外作业
假定你是学生李华，请以the meaning of life为题给迷茫的弟弟写封信，内容要点包括：
1. 人生的意义。
2. 原因。
3. 我的做法。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
3. 开头、结语已为你写好。
Dear Brother，
…
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
参考答案与范文
四、习作修改
本文是高中生写给校长的一封信，反映了校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter）的行为，并提出建议措施，使校园恢复美丽。
1. for →to 词组draw one’s attention to...把某人的注意力吸引到。
2. proper→improper 由句子意思可知，乱扔垃圾，乱涂是“不合适”的行为。
3. 去掉a 词组：in fact（实际上）。
4. does→doing 句子已经有谓语makes，does应改为非谓语doing，表伴随或结果； 或者在does前加and，将 makes和does并列起来。
5. shameful→ashamed 表示“感到羞愧的”。
6. appropriately→appropriate 作表语要用形容词。
7. dustbin→dustbins，垃圾桶是可数名词。
8. yourselves→themselves 人称要一致，主语是students，反身代词是themselves。
9. firm→firmly 修饰动词believe，用副词firmly“坚定地”。
10. becomes→will become 时间是in the near future，用将来时。
五、课堂练习
Dear Mum and Dad，
Since I was young， I have dreamed of becoming a doctor. To pursue my dream， I will spare no effort to go to Zhongshan University， which is famous for medical research.
Why do I want to be a doctor？ When I was in hospital many years ago， a doctor worked for a long time to save a baby’s life， which moved me deeply. Besides， it is said that there is increasing demand for them. I want to be a doctor to meet the needs of people.
My dream inspires me to take action. I will make full use of my time and work hard at all subjects. To improve my practical skills， I will devote myself to biological experiment. I hold the belief that my hard work will lay a solid foundation for my ideal future. I will appreciate it if you can trust me and support my choice.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
六、课外作业
Dear brother，
It seems that you lose the passion for life. I am writing to share with you my understanding of the meaning of life.
What’s the meaning of life？ Life means living well and helping others live well. It is not what we have but what we can do for others that makes life meaningful.
When we are young， our parents take good care of us. When we are faced with difficulties， our friends help us and encourage us not to lose heart. Thanks to them， we have a better life. In return， when they are in need， we should solve the problems for them. Besides， it is giving that gives us happiness， a sense of satisfaction.
In our spare time， we should do voluntary work， such as planting trees， donating used clothes and so on. I will seize the opportunity to help others. By making a contribution to the society， we can make a difference. Only in this way can we have a meaningful life.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
（作者单位：广东深圳市松岗中学）
责任编辑 蒋小青