一、生活中缺求新的眼睛人教版五年级《语文》下册“习作四”要求选一件令你感动的事写下来。内容要具体,语句要通顺,感情要真实。题目自己定。写完以后,要认真改一改。此篇习作,我的45个学生中有42人写的是父母雨夜或雪夜送自己去看病。经了解,确实有6个学生经历过此事。其他学生说从作文选上读过类似的文章,认为只有这样的材料才能真正感动人。 First, the lack of new life in the eyes PEP fifth grade “language” under the book “practice four ” asked to choose a thing that touched you down. The content should be specific, the sentences should be fluent, the feelings should be real. Subject to their own set. After writing, we must seriously change. In this exercise, 42 of my 45 students wrote that they were sent by their parents for rainy night or snowy night. After understanding, there are indeed 6 students experienced the matter. Other students said they read similar essays from the composition, believing that only such material can really move people.