摆放在我面前的,是上海中学一位中学生的习作。篇名令我想起了作家余华的成名作《十八岁出门远行》。这无疑意味着,其字里行间透示出的是处于青春成长期的个体的心路印痕。他们的经历虽然简单,思想虽然稚嫩,然而有激情,有梦想。他们张望着这个繁复斑斓的世界,在理想与现实之间寻找着差距,渴望人生的变化,期冀生命的答案。前篇作者片段式地描述了自己 Placed before me is a high school student in Shanghai secondary school exercises. The title reminds me of the famous actress Yu Hua, “Eighteen Going Forever.” This undoubtedly means that the lines between the lines show the impressions of the minds of individuals in their youthful growth. Although their experience is simple, although immature thinking, however, there is passion and dream. They looked at this complex and gorgeous world, looking for the gap between ideal and reality, longing for the changes in life and expecting the answer to life. The former author described himself as a fragment