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高一新生记叙文写作中,明显存在以下几个方面的不足:(1)题材范围狭窄,多是学校、家庭或公交车上的事件;(2)概括叙述太多,细致描写太少,如记流水账;(3)写人记叙文和叙事记叙文不分,或文体不清、记叙文中抒情或议论过多;(4)语言生硬,词不达意,缺乏修改能力与修改习惯。学生由初中步入高中,满怀对学好高中语文的憧憬,但在作文方面,部分学生初中写作自我感觉良好,到了高中,面对一些学
In the writing of New Senior High School narratives, there are obvious deficiencies in the following aspects: (1) The scope of topics is narrow, mostly events in schools, families or buses; (2) There are too many narratives and too few descriptions, such as (3) There is no distinction between narrator narrative and narrative narrative, or ambiguity in narration, narrative or lyricism; or (4) hard language, lack of meaning in words, lack of ability to modify and modify habits. Students from junior high school to high school, full of knowledge of high school language, but in composition, some students feel good about writing junior high school, to high school, face some