《如果优美的文字离我们而去》是诗人邓海南的针砭时弊之作。诗人有感于时尚文字的浮华与功利,高声呼唤文学的“真诚”与“审美”。文字缺乏“真诚”与“审美”的时弊,既是文坛之弊,也是学生的作文之弊。因此,在教学时,我引导学生对“什么是‘真诚’”进行了讨论——师:诗人邓 “If graceful words go away from us” is the pinnacle of the poet Deng Hainan. The poet feels the glitz and utilitarianity of fashion texts and loudly calls for the literature’s “sincerity” and “aesthetic.” The lack of “sincerity” and “aesthetic” in the writing is not only a disadvantage of the literary world, but also a disadvantage of the students’ composition. Therefore, during the teaching, I guided the students to discuss “what is ’sincere’”. Teacher: The poet Deng