叶圣陶先生曾说:“国文教学自有它独当其任的任,那就是阅读与写作的训练。”①可见写作教学与训练在语文教育中有其“半壁江山”的重要地位。但是审视现代学生作文,现状不容乐观,主要存在立意陈旧、选材单一、思路不清、认识肤浅、语言 Mr. Ye Shengtao once said: “Chinese teaching has its own responsibility, that is, the training of reading and writing.” ① Visible writing teaching and training have an important position in Chinese education. However, looking at the composition of modern students, the status quo is not optimistic, the main existence of old-fashioned, single selection, lack of clear thinking, understanding of superficial, language