一、观察生活,力求写实小学生作文常是脱离实际,生搬硬套,字词不够废话凑,像挤牙膏似地想一句写一句。如何改变这种状况呢?先让我们来看巴金的《海上日出》中的一段描写:“太阳像负着什么重担似的,慢慢儿,一纵一纵的,使劲儿上升。到了最后,它终于冲破云霞,完全跳出了海面,颜色真红的可爱……”这段话描写了太阳升起时的景象。 First, observe the life, and strive to be realistic Pupils often break away from the actual composition, mechanically, nonsense words, such as squeezing toothpaste like to write a sentence. How to change the situation? Let us look at Ba Jin’s “Sunrise on the Sea,” a description: “The sun is like the burden of what kind of burden, slowly, vertical and horizontal, and strive to rise. Finally, it finally broke through clouds, completely out of the sea, the color is really cute red ... ”This section describes the sun rises when the scene.