我认为我们的学术论文存在六个问题:第一个问题是引言过于笼统,起不到引言的作用.对研究背景、内容、工作的意义,没有实质性描述.第二个问题是整个学术论文没有对同行工作的介绍,把我们的学术论文一放到国际背景下,看起来有点像小学生的论文.第三个问题是作者手上没有有分量的 I think there are six problems in our academic thesis: the first is that the introduction is too general and can not be used as an introduction, and there is no substantive description of the research background, content, and the meaning of the work. The second problem is that the entire academic thesis Without an introduction to peer work, putting our scholarly paper into the international context looks a bit like a paper for a pupil. The third problem is that the author has no weight