我们开始学写事,常常出现这样的问题—写了很多,但不能给人留下深刻印象。这是为什么呢?主要是因为我们在叙述事情的时候,没有抓住重点。那么,怎样才能突出重点呢?偷偷告诉你一个诀窍:事情有起因、经过和结果,把“经过”作为重点写,就会有不一样的感觉。有一个同学记录了最近发生的一件事:搬进新居,蚊子害得人睡不好觉。我听邻居爷爷说,楼下的草是蚊子的老窝,就决心把草拔掉。我拿起小铲子 We started to learn to write, and we often had such problems - we wrote a lot, but we can not impress people. Why? This is mainly because we did not grasp the key points when we were describing things. So, how can we highlight the secret? Secretly tell you a trick: things have a cause, after and results, the “through” as the focus of writing, there will be a different feeling. One of my classmates recorded a recent incident: moving into a new home where mosquitoes can not sleep well. I heard my neighbor grandfather said that grass downstairs is the mosquito’s nest, determined to unplug the grass. I picked up the shovel