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摘要：本文针对当前广东高三学生无法区别英语读写任务中举例说明与列举的实际情况，笔者结合教学实践，通过介绍举例说明与列举的区别，并精选广东省模拟试题与原创试题，使考生通过分析对比训练提高写作训练的实效性。
关键词：读写任务；举例说明；列举
中图分类号：G632.0 文献标识码：A 文章编号：1992-7711（2013）15-0111
最近，笔者在读写任务训练中，发现学生仍无法区别读写任务中的举例说明与列举。现结合广东模拟题进行分析，希望能引起广大考生的注意。
一、举例说明
[解析]要求考生描述自身或他人的经历即通过讲故事的方式加以说明。但为了防止考生用过多的文字描述自身经历，造成正文篇幅不一，一般建议考生以3-4句话简单描述即可。
[举例说明的句型]
1. When it comes to the importance of the honesty， a good case in point is what happened on my last holiday.（2011年广州一模）
当谈到诚信的重要性，我上次度假发生的事就是一个很好的例子。
2. I think perhaps nothing can illustrate the influence the harmonious relationship between teachers and students had on me better than the example of my own experience this term.（2010年华师附中）
我想可能没有比我这学期的经历的这一例子更能说明和谐的师生关系对我的影响了。
3. A good example of the influence sharing the housework had on me can be best provided by the case of my own experience last year.（2011年高三四校联考）说明承担家务责任给予我的影响的一个很好的例子是我去年的经历。
[实例1]以约120个词就教师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
举例说明该教师对你学习或成长的影响；（2012年广东）
When it comes to the impact my English teacher had on me， a good case in point is what happened to me when I was in senior two. I lost in the oral English contest on a Friday， feeling disappointed. My English teacher helped me get rid of the depression. With her help， I gradually regained my confidence.
二、列举
[解析]要求考生客观地阐述某一内容，如：原因、影响、措施等内容，且至少需要列举两点或三点。因此要点中要求“谈谈……的道理”、“说明……的理由 ”、“谈谈……的危害”等则都是要求考生客观地阐述某一内容。
[列举的过渡性的词汇] 运用一些过渡性的词汇如：首先“to stat with/ to begin with/ first and foremost”；其次“what’s more/moreover/ in addition/additionally/besides”等，使文章层次清晰、行文连贯。
[实例2]以约120个词表达你对餐桌文化的理解，并包括如下要点：
列举你周围人们在餐桌上的不恰当行为和习惯（2013年惠州一模）
The improper behaviors and habits of the people at the table can be described as follow. To begin with， people talk loudly with a lot of food in their mouth. Besides， they pick teeth in front of others without using their left hands to cover their mouth.
[试题精选]
1. 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“坚守信念”的讨论。读完Monty Roberts的故事之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Belief can change one’s fate” 。
举一两个例子去论证“坚守信念能改变人的命运”；（11东莞一模）
2. 以约120个词就“勿以善小而不为”的主题发表看法，至少包括以下内容要点
3. 然后以120个词写一篇读后感，说明“诚信的重要性”。
[原创练习]
然后以约120个词就“暑期自习难”谈谈你的想法，包括：（1）举例说明“暑期自习难”所带来的影响；（2）简述暑期自习的好处；（3）列举校方为了保障学生的暑期自习应采取的措施。
参考范文
[试题精选]
1. Belief is so important that it can change one’s fate. To be specific， as a deaf man， Beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last year of his life， though he was not able to hear his own fine music. Besides， Marie Curie， a famous scientist， also has set a good example. In 1898， she found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to improve her discovery， Marie and her husband worked hard. At last they saw the dim blue light of new element - radium. Her dream had come true finally.
关键词：读写任务；举例说明；列举
中图分类号：G632.0 文献标识码：A 文章编号：1992-7711（2013）15-0111
最近，笔者在读写任务训练中，发现学生仍无法区别读写任务中的举例说明与列举。现结合广东模拟题进行分析，希望能引起广大考生的注意。
一、举例说明
[解析]要求考生描述自身或他人的经历即通过讲故事的方式加以说明。但为了防止考生用过多的文字描述自身经历，造成正文篇幅不一，一般建议考生以3-4句话简单描述即可。
[举例说明的句型]
1. When it comes to the importance of the honesty， a good case in point is what happened on my last holiday.（2011年广州一模）
当谈到诚信的重要性，我上次度假发生的事就是一个很好的例子。
2. I think perhaps nothing can illustrate the influence the harmonious relationship between teachers and students had on me better than the example of my own experience this term.（2010年华师附中）
我想可能没有比我这学期的经历的这一例子更能说明和谐的师生关系对我的影响了。
3. A good example of the influence sharing the housework had on me can be best provided by the case of my own experience last year.（2011年高三四校联考）说明承担家务责任给予我的影响的一个很好的例子是我去年的经历。
[实例1]以约120个词就教师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
举例说明该教师对你学习或成长的影响；（2012年广东）
When it comes to the impact my English teacher had on me， a good case in point is what happened to me when I was in senior two. I lost in the oral English contest on a Friday， feeling disappointed. My English teacher helped me get rid of the depression. With her help， I gradually regained my confidence.
二、列举
[解析]要求考生客观地阐述某一内容，如：原因、影响、措施等内容，且至少需要列举两点或三点。因此要点中要求“谈谈……的道理”、“说明……的理由 ”、“谈谈……的危害”等则都是要求考生客观地阐述某一内容。
[列举的过渡性的词汇] 运用一些过渡性的词汇如：首先“to stat with/ to begin with/ first and foremost”；其次“what’s more/moreover/ in addition/additionally/besides”等，使文章层次清晰、行文连贯。
[实例2]以约120个词表达你对餐桌文化的理解，并包括如下要点：
列举你周围人们在餐桌上的不恰当行为和习惯（2013年惠州一模）
The improper behaviors and habits of the people at the table can be described as follow. To begin with， people talk loudly with a lot of food in their mouth. Besides， they pick teeth in front of others without using their left hands to cover their mouth.
[试题精选]
1. 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“坚守信念”的讨论。读完Monty Roberts的故事之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Belief can change one’s fate” 。
举一两个例子去论证“坚守信念能改变人的命运”；（11东莞一模）
2. 以约120个词就“勿以善小而不为”的主题发表看法，至少包括以下内容要点
3. 然后以120个词写一篇读后感，说明“诚信的重要性”。
[原创练习]
然后以约120个词就“暑期自习难”谈谈你的想法，包括：（1）举例说明“暑期自习难”所带来的影响；（2）简述暑期自习的好处；（3）列举校方为了保障学生的暑期自习应采取的措施。
参考范文
[试题精选]
1. Belief is so important that it can change one’s fate. To be specific， as a deaf man， Beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last year of his life， though he was not able to hear his own fine music. Besides， Marie Curie， a famous scientist， also has set a good example. In 1898， she found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to improve her discovery， Marie and her husband worked hard. At last they saw the dim blue light of new element - radium. Her dream had come true finally.