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著名作家魏巍说过:“写好一篇东西,能打动人心,就要把心捧给读者。”这话意思是说,写作文要吐露真情,人间自有真情在,唯有真情最动人。他写的《我的老师》一文便是真情动人的美文佳作。他在回忆孩提时代蔡云芝老师对自己卓有成效的教导和率真而热烈的爱,感受是自己的,故而最实在,生活是自己的,故而认识才有深度。正是出于这种无限怀念、崇敬和爱戴的心情,行文以“难忘之情”作统帅,处处在“难忘”上落笔,层层向“最”字推进。其抒情手法,主要是:
The famous writer Wei Wei said: “If you write something that can touch people, you must give your heart to the reader.” This is to say that the writing should reveal the true feelings and the true feelings of the human world. Only the true feelings are most touching. The article “My Teacher” written by him is a beautiful and memorable masterpiece in the United States. He remembers his childhood teacher Cai Yunzhi’s effective instruction and sincere and passionate love. His feelings are his own. Therefore, the most truthful thing is that his life is his own, and therefore his understanding is deep. It is out of such an infinite memory, admiration and affection that the language is commanded by “unforgettable feelings.” Everywhere, the pen is “unforgettable”, and the layers advance to the “most” character. Its lyricism is mainly: