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If an old man falls down， will you help him with your hands？ There are probably two opinions in our life.
One is that we should help the old man stand first because being glad to help others is a Chinese traditional virtue. Everyone needs help when they get in the troubles. The other is that we needn’t help the man at once： we are supposed to call 120 or 110 first of all. But I agree with the first opinion more. We all know the saying “I do for everyone， everyone does for me”. If we don’t help others， why need others help us when we are in the same situation？
Everyone should be responsible for the society， shouldn’t we？
张稳花老师点评：本文针对当前“老人摔倒扶或不扶”的热议话题提出自己的观点，句式多变，条理清楚，不失为一篇好文章。文章虽有些短语使用不够准确，引用的名言也不太地道，但瑕不掩瑜。
范文：
If an old man falls down， will you help him with your hands？ There are probably two opinions in our life.
One is that we should help the old man stand up first because being glad to help others is a Chinese traditional virtue. Everyone needs help when they get into trouble. The other is that we needn’t help the man at once， we are supposed to call 120 or 110 first for help. But I agree with the first opinion more . We all know the saying “One for all， all for one.” If we don’t help others， why will others help us when we are in the same situation？
Everyone should be responsible for the society， shouldn’t we？
相關链接：一篇好的英语作文，除了句式多变、条理清楚、内容完整外，还要注意一些细节的东西，如主谓一致、名词的单复数要准确等，还要使用地道的英语，不能是Chinglish。
One is that we should help the old man stand first because being glad to help others is a Chinese traditional virtue. Everyone needs help when they get in the troubles. The other is that we needn’t help the man at once： we are supposed to call 120 or 110 first of all. But I agree with the first opinion more. We all know the saying “I do for everyone， everyone does for me”. If we don’t help others， why need others help us when we are in the same situation？
Everyone should be responsible for the society， shouldn’t we？
张稳花老师点评：本文针对当前“老人摔倒扶或不扶”的热议话题提出自己的观点，句式多变，条理清楚，不失为一篇好文章。文章虽有些短语使用不够准确，引用的名言也不太地道，但瑕不掩瑜。
范文：
If an old man falls down， will you help him with your hands？ There are probably two opinions in our life.
One is that we should help the old man stand up first because being glad to help others is a Chinese traditional virtue. Everyone needs help when they get into trouble. The other is that we needn’t help the man at once， we are supposed to call 120 or 110 first for help. But I agree with the first opinion more . We all know the saying “One for all， all for one.” If we don’t help others， why will others help us when we are in the same situation？
Everyone should be responsible for the society， shouldn’t we？
相關链接：一篇好的英语作文，除了句式多变、条理清楚、内容完整外，还要注意一些细节的东西，如主谓一致、名词的单复数要准确等，还要使用地道的英语，不能是Chinglish。