人教版课标实验教材七年级下册,选编了冰心先生的散文《观舞记》,作者以满腔的热情、优美的笔触细腻地描摹了印度舞蹈家卡拉玛姐妹的精彩表演,可谓舞美文亦美。但笔者以为,白璧尚有微瑕,文中有几处标点和用字还值得商榷。1.第2-6自然段:假如我是个诗人,我就要写出一首长诗,来描 People’s Education Edition of the seventh grade standard textbook experimental materials, selected Mr. Bing Xin’s essay “concept of dance”, the author filled with enthusiasm, beautiful strokes finely depicts the Indian dancer Karama sisters wonderful performance, described as the United States and the United States Also beautiful. However, I think, Bai Bi still slightly flawed, the text has several punctuation and the use of words is also debatable. 1. 2-6 Natural Segment: If I am a poet, I will write a poem to describe