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(一)关于新诗形式问题的通信20多年前,我曾与北京大学林庚教授通过一次信。那是1983年3月,笔者在一次“林庚先生与新格律诗创作”的讲座以后,草成《借鉴文言诗的句式,建立新诗典型诗行》,于5月8日寄林庚先生,并就新诗诗行的“半逗律”问题,向先生请教。林庚先生认为古代律绝中,五七言是其典型诗行,因而主张新诗也必须建立典型诗行,每句可在9—11字之间,一般不超过13个字;顿数大抵整齐,但中间应有短暂停顿,称为“半逗律”。笔者非常赞同先生的主张与创作尝试。笔者信中引用了林庚先生《春野》诗中
(I) Communication on the Form of New Poetry More than 20 years ago, I had passed a letter with Professor Lin Lin of Peking University. That was March 1983, after a lecture entitled “The Creation of Mr. Lin Geng and His New Metrical Poems”, the author made a proposal of “borrowing the sentence style of classical Chinese poetry and establishing a typical poem line of new poetry” on May 8 and sending him a letter on May 8 Mr. Geng, and on the new poems and poems “semi-funny ” question, consult to Mr. Lin Geng believes that the ancient law absolutely, five or seven words is its typical poem line, and therefore advocate the new poetry must also establish a typical poem line, each sentence can be between 9-11 words, generally no more than 13 words; , But there should be a short pause in the middle, called “semi-amuse ”. The author very much agree with the idea and creative attempt of Mr. The author quotes Mr. Lin Geng’s “Chun Ye” poem