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《尴尬瞬间》是华中师大《语文教学与研究》杂志举办的“跨世纪”杯全国中学生作文大赛的一个命题,这一篇是从问题作文中选出的,可以说是优秀的一篇,它获得了特等奖。 就题义而言,尴尬瞬间,是一个偏正式结构的短语,瞬间是个时间概念,尴尬是个情绪概念,即要求所表现的情绪不仅应该是尴尬的,而且应该是瞬间发生的。这篇作品分为三章,三章写了三件事,三件事互相之间没有关联,因此可以把它们看作三个独立体。其中,A写“我”面对一个以行乞致富的乞丐,给不给予施舍;B写“我”面对自己发誓势不两立的邻居把一脸灿烂的笑容送上门来,还帮不帮她抬煤气罐;C写“我”看到踩碎的钢笔,立即意识到错怪了同学。三个尴尬瞬间的小故事,由一个标题把它们串起来,形成了整体。
“Awkward moment” is a proposition of “Cross-Century Cup” national high school student essay contest organized by “Chinese Teaching and Research” magazine of Huazhong Normal University. This one is selected from the essay of the problem and can be said to be an excellent article, It won a grand prize. As far as the meaning goes, embarrassed moment is a formal structure of the phrase, the moment is a concept of time, embarrassment is an emotional concept that the performance of the emotions required not only should be embarrassing, but should be an instantaneous occurrence. This work is divided into three chapters, three chapters have written three things, three things are not related to each other, so they can be seen as three separate bodies. Among them, A wrote “I” in the face of a beggar begging to get rich, giving no alms; B wrote “I” in the face of his oath of irreconcilable neighbor smiled a smile on his face, but also help to help her carry gas Can; C wrote “I” saw broken pens, immediately realized that the wrong students. Three awkward moments of the little story, by a title to string them together to form a whole.