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拜读《秘书之友》2014年第7期刊登的李小冰同志撰写的《究竟怎么放假?——评改一篇晦涩难懂的通知》一文后,笔者感到该文纠正了原文诸多毛病,应当肯定,值得称道;同时感到,它对原文的评改尚不到位,文中的修改稿(以下简作“改稿”)还存在不足之处。为使评改趋于完善,促进公文评改事业发展,笔者特撰此文再作评改,并就评改后联想到的问题进行思考,与学界同人研讨、交流。一、评析和再修改(一)原文和改稿【原文】关于2013年中秋节、国庆节放假安排的通知
After reading the article entitled “How to Holiday ?, Commenting on an Obscure Notice,” published by Comrade Li Xiaobing published in No. 7 of Friends of Secretary 2014, I feel that the article corrected many problems in the original text and should be affirmed and worthy Praised; at the same time feel that it is not in place for the original text of the review, the text of the revised draft (hereinafter referred to as “Re-draft ”) there are still inadequacies. In order to improve the reform and promote the development of official document evaluation, I author this article for further review, and think about the problems after the reform, with the academic colleagues to discuss and exchange. First, the assessment and revisions (a) of the original and redraft [Original] on the Mid-Autumn Festival in 2013, National Day holiday arrangements notice