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新学年开学了,我任教高一两个班语文。为了了解学生的写作现状,开学第一课我就让大家以“热”为话题写一篇不少于800字的记叙文,要求选材真实。以下是同学们写蚊子的两个片段。(1)“‘嗡嗡……’,几只蚊子唱着歌从我耳边飞过,不停地在我眼前晃悠,它们时而停在书上,时而叮在墙上,似乎在向我挑衅。真可恶!我发誓要把这些不知天高地厚的蚊子打成‘肉酱’……”(赵菲等)(2)“天色早暗了下来,还是闷,还是热,连蚊子都懒得出来觅食。不对,整个夏天都没见
In the new academic year, I will teach the first and second class languages. In order to understand the current situation of the students’ writing, I will let everyone write a narrative of no less than 800 words with the topic of “hot” for the first class. The following are two fragments of students writing mosquitoes. (1)”’嗡嗡 嗡嗡 ’ ’ ’ ’ ’ , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,” Provocative, really hateful! I vowed to make these unrelentingly thick mosquitoes ’powder sauce’...“ (”Zhao Fei et al.“) (2) ”It’s dark, it’s still stuffy or hot, and even the mosquitoes are too lazy Come out for food. No, I haven’t seen it all summer.