翻阅《中华诗词》2014年第9期,偶然看到杨光治先生《时下诗词几弊》这篇文章,发现拙作《侗乡井台晨曲》(载《中华诗词》2014年第3期,全文如下:“清澈山泉润侗乡,亭台小巧角檐张,青葱白菜红酥手,银桶金钩担水郎。”)受到杨先生器重,也列入“‘土豪’气派”而遭到批评。余诚惶诚恐,一口气读了下去。杨先生说:“侗乡人民生活大有改善,这是事实。但‘红酥手’、‘银桶金钩’之类的描写,则是脱离生活实际的封建时代闺阁式的涂饰。这种庸俗诗风应当唾弃。”我不知道“土豪”一词古意今意的区别,不知道“‘土豪’气派”所指为何,更不知道杨 Read the “Chinese Poetry” 2014 the ninth period, accidentally see Mr. Yang Guangzhi “What are the disadvantages of poetry nowadays” this article, found my clue “Dongxiang Jingtai Morning Sound” (contained in “Chinese Poetry” 2014 the third period, the full text is as follows : “Clear mountain spring Run Dong, booths small corner Zhang, green cabbage red crisp hand, silver bucket gold hook Shui Lang.”) Received by Mr. Yang, also included Has been criticized. Yu Cheng fearful, read one breath down. Mr. Yang said: “It is a fact that the living conditions of the people in the Dong area have greatly improved, but descriptions such as the” Red Courier “and the” Silver Bullion “are detached from the feudal period of the real life. Kind of vulgar poetic style should be cast aside. ”I do not know “ Tyrant ”the meaning of the ancient meaning of this meaning, do not know “ Tyrant style ”refers to why, but do not know Young