一、当下作文教学之殇一次习作比赛要求以“温暖”为主题,写一件发生在自己身上被人关心的事情。1300位参赛学生,约500位不约而同地写到“夜晚突然发烧,爸爸妈妈背自己去医院,结果自己的病好了,爸爸妈妈却病了”;455位写到“下雨天,妈妈冒雨送伞,伞打在自己的头顶,妈妈淋病了”;还有210位写“放学回家,家里没有人,邻居把他带回家,好吃好喝”……依上可见,90%的学生写出的是雷同文,看起来事例典型、章法有度,但读起来给人的感觉却假而空,实在找不到一丝“温暖”的感觉;很少有学生写真实被关心的日常小事,比如冬夜里妈妈每天细心地给 First, the current essay teaching 殇 a writing competition requires “warm ” as the theme, write one happened in their own body was concerned about things. 1300 participating students, about 500 invariably wrote “suddenly a fever at night, mom and dad to go to the hospital themselves, the results of his illness is good, but the father and mother are ill”; 455 wrote “rainy day, mother Umbrella on his head, mom gonorrhea ”, there are 210 write “ home from school, no one at home, the neighbors took him home, delicious drink ” Can be seen that 90% of students write the same text, it seems typical of the case, the chapter has a degree, but it feels fake and empty, really can not find a trace of “warm” feeling; Few Students write real small things are concerned about, such as winter night mother carefully every day to give