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古代教师对学生的作文批阅十分重视,总结了许多有益的经验,这对指导我们搞好作文批改是很有裨益的。批改要富有启发性。这是古人谈作文批阅的一条重要经验。清人唐彪曾说过:『先生于子弟之文,倘有可改之处,宜细心笔削,令有点铁成金之妙,斯善矣』。(《父师善诱法》下卷)这段论述中有三点值得记取:『可改之处』就是要求改其当改,改得恰当,这是从批改内容上说的;『细心笔削』,
The ancient teachers attached great importance to the student’s essay review and summed up many useful experiences. This is very helpful for guiding us to do a good job in writing. Corrections should be instructive. This is an important experience that the ancients talked about writing. Tang Qing Tang once said: “If Mr. Yu is a child, if there is anything that can be changed, he should carefully study it and make it a bit of iron and gold. (The ”Father’s Good Deception Act,“ next volume) There are three points in this statement that are worth remembering: ”The place to be changed" is to ask them to change their circumstances and change them appropriately. This is stated in the content of the correction; 』,