澳门陈荣森先生的《榕树》(见1995年第5期中心彩页),是一件比较成功的很有前途的作品。若能在此基础上再作一番努力,在干、枝、叶等方面进而着力构筑的话,那么,该作必将成为不可多得的佳作。这里想就作品的一些长处和存在的某些不足,谈谈我的浅见,并提出一些改进意见,谨供陈先生和读者朋友参考。 Mr. Chen Rongsen’s “Banyan Tree” (see No. 5, 1995, Central Color Page), is a relatively successful and promising piece of work. If we can make some efforts on this basis and strive to build on stems, branches and leaves, then this work will surely become a rare masterpiece. Here I would like to talk about my views on some strengths and some shortcomings of the work, and put forward some suggestions for improvement, for your reference.