大凡能获得高分的作文,虽各有亮点,但有一点却很相似,那就是语言流畅、文采飞扬,这样的作文读起来让人有一种舒畅感。“有文采”来自对语言的精心打磨。那么,如何才能使作文文采飞扬呢?一、锤炼词句,笔墨传神阿基米德说:“给我一个支点,我可以撬动地球!”写作也是如此,有时,一两个精彩的词语便能令文章瞬间生色不少。描述写作对象时,我们要尽量选用那些 Although most of the compositions that can score high scores have their own bright spots, one thing is very similar. That is to say, the language is fluent and the literature and writing are flying high. This composition makes people feel comfortable. “There is literary talent ” from the carefully polished language. So, how can make the composition Wen Cai flying it? First, tempered words, vivid expression Archimedes said: “Give me a fulcrum, I can pry the earth! ” Writing is also true, sometimes, one or two wonderful words Can make the article a lot of instant color. When describing the writing object, we should try to choose those