“文似看山不喜平。”如果别人一看你的文章就觉得老套、平铺直叙,就会丧失阅读的兴趣。所以,我们在作文时要追求表达新鲜。其实,“表达新鲜”就是在语言通顺的前提下,务去陈言,力避千篇一律、平铺直叙。可以活用词语,修辞多样,句式多变,让文章亮丽起来,熠熠生辉;可讲究技巧,各种描写手法各得其所,努力在形式上进行新的探索,不落窠臼。那是多少年来我的梦境,橙黄的花朵,跳出了绿意,灿灿的,像盛满了阳光。恍惚间,我听到自己的叹息:总有一天,我会怀念今天,现在,此时。我是一只不同寻常的兔子,我会做梦。白兔,紫花,绿枝叶。我卧在层层坠满深浅紫花的藤枝之间,做着星河的梦。光不知怎样打着旋儿覆在我的雪白绒毛上。似是故人来,落花如星子铺满长廊,我听到细碎的声响。 “Man seems to see the mountains do not like flat. ” If others look at your article feel stereotypes, straightforward, you will lose interest in reading. Therefore, we should pursue fresh expression when writing. In fact, “express fresh ” is the premise of fluent in language, to go to Chen Yan, to avoid stereotyped, straightforward. You can use the words, rhetoric and diverse, sentence changeable, so bright and shiny articles, can pay attention to skills, various descriptive techniques have their own place, and strive to make new forms in the exploration, without losing sight. That is how many years my dream, orange flowers, out of the green, brilliant, like full of sunshine. Trance, I heard my sigh: one day, I will miss today, now, at this time. I am an unusual rabbit, I will dream. White rabbit, purple, green branches. I lie in layers of deep purple flowers between the branches, doing Galaxy dream. I do not know how the name of the spin covered in my snow white velvet. It seems like an old man, falling astronauts covered corridor, I heard the sound of broken.