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我庆幸我有一双能看见光明的眼睛,让我去阅读纸页上的美丽;我庆幸我有一双能听见声音的耳朵,让我去“阅读”自然的“声音”;我庆幸我有一颗能够阅读的心。(起笔的感情很浓,采用了排比的技法将语言写得颇有感染力———细细读来,最后一句似乎与前句不够协调,而且,从昭示内蕴的角度来看,这一句应该最为重要,你采取“弱化该句”之策,不太好———反正,我不赞成。)
I am glad I have a pair of eyes that can see the light, let me go to read the beauty of the paper; I am glad I have a pair of ears to hear the sound, let me go “Reading ” Natural “sound ”; I have a heart that I can read. (Since the feeling is very strong, the use of row than the language of writing skills quite infectious - read carefully, the last sentence seems to be not coordinated with the previous sentence, and, from the implicit point of view, this sentence Should be the most important, you take “weaken the sentence ” policy, not good - anyway, I do not agree.)