一、原稿比较法。比较原稿对于提高写作能力有着重要的启发作用。教毛主席词《沁园春·雪》可把“山舞银蛇,原驰蜡象”一句与原稿“山舞银蛇,原驱腊象”比较:“改如为”“驰”就使秦晋高原由被驱赶的被动地位变成了主动地位,化静为动,遂是意境生辉;改“腊象”为“蜡象”,就与“银蛇”相对称,突出了漫天皆白的雪景,且变深奥难懂为浅显易懂,使用字技巧提高了一步. First, the manuscript comparison method. Comparing manuscripts has important inspiration for improving writing skills. To teach Chairman Mao’s words “Guan Yuan Chun Xue” to compare the phrase “The Mountain Dance Silver Snake, The Original Chi Wa Xiang” with the original “The Mountain Dancing Silver Snake, The Original Draughting Elephant”: “If you change it,” then “chi”, you make it The passive status of the Qin and Qing dynasty was driven from a passive position to an active one. The static and the static were dynamic, and the ambiguous was the artistic conception. The “wax like” was replaced by the “silver snake” and it was sympathetic to the “silver snake”. The snow scene becomes harder to understand and easier to understand.