你请《四川音乐》编辑部转交我的几封信和曲稿都收到了。你在条件很差的环境里能刻苦自学,努力实践的精神很可贵,望保持发扬。纵观你的曲稿,感情较健康,旋律基本通顺,有的地方也有一定的风格,但恕我直言,问题也确乎不少。尤其在《金银花》一稿里,表现得较为集中,有于鉴此,我想对 You asked me “Sichuan Music” editorial to send me a few letters and the script has been received. You can study hard in a poor environment, and the spirit of hard work is valuable and hopefully maintained. Throughout your music, feeling healthier, the melody basically smooth, and some places have a certain style, but IMHO, the problem is indeed quite a lot. Especially in the “honeysuckle” a draft, the performance is more concentrated, in this regard, I think right