正确了,就满足?一次,批阅孩子们写的比喻句、拟人句,我发现这些句子千篇一律,了无生气。对此,我这样写下评语:“你能写个更精彩的句子吗?”同事说我阅卷太苛刻———“正确了,为什么还不满足呢?”正确了,就应该满足吗?在照样子写比喻句一题中,学生常写的“答案”有以下几种: Correct, to meet? Once, to read the children to write metaphor sentences, to be people sentence, I found these sentences stereotyped, lifeless. In this regard, I wrote the following comments: “Can you write a more exciting sentence?” “Colleagues said I was too harsh ---” is correct, why not satisfied? “Correct, it should be Satisfied? In the usual analogy to write a question, the students often write ”answer " the following: