一、书面表达题回顾假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。(满分25分)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。二、学生范文呈现作文编号:100100113三、作文评析(一)作文亮点1.从整体看,本文书信格式正确,字数达到要求,卷面整洁,书写流畅工整。 First, the written expression of review assume that you are Li Hua, summer vacation want to go to a foreign trade company part-time, has written an application and resume (resume). Write a letter to Ms Jenkins, a foreign teacher, and ask her to change the text and format of the accompanying materials. (Out of 25 points) Note: 1. The number of words around 100; 2 can be appropriate to increase the details, so that coherent writing. Second, the students Pham Van presentation number: 100100113 Third, composition analysis (A) Writing highlights 1. From the overall point of view, this letter format is correct, the number of words to meet the requirements, neat surface, writing smooth and neat.