小学生作文的“假、大、空”“千篇一律”“成人化”等问题一直是令人头痛的现象。小学生作文为什么会这样呢?原因固然很多,但其中很重要的一点是我们对“儿童作文”的“需要”发生了错位。一、“儿童作文”需要“儿童的真实”“儿童的真实”与“成人的真实”是不同的。在成人眼里,天空中火红的圆球才是太阳;在儿童笔下,太阳可能是方的,也可能是不规则的多边形,而色彩也可能是绿色、黄色等。在成人眼里,马是四蹄驰骋的动物;在儿童笔下,马却插上了翅膀在云彩中飞驰。在成人的眼里,鸡蛋比母鸡小许多;在儿童笔下,鸡蛋比老母鸡大了许多。由此可见,“成人的真实”是以客观存在为标准的, Problems such as “fake, big and empty”, “stereotyped”, “adult” in primary school composition have always been a headache. Why does the composition of pupils like this? There are many reasons for this, but one of the most important points is that we have a misplaced position on the “need” of “children’s composition.” First, the “children’s composition ” needs “children’s real ” “children’s real ” and “adult’s real ” is different. In the eyes of adults, the fiery balloon in the sky is the sun. In children’s writing, the sun may be square or irregular polygons, and the colors may be green or yellow. In the eyes of adults, the horse is a four-gallop animal; under the pen of a child, the horse has wings spread in the clouds. In the eyes of adults, the eggs are much smaller than the hens; in the children’s writing, the eggs are much larger than the old ones. From this it can be seen that “adult reality ” is based on the objective existence as the standard,