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子衿说:赵凯欣的文章向来以真实和细节取胜。在第十一届放胆作文大赛中,她的《隔壁》凭借着对生活细节与人物内心活动的细致描写,给读者留下了深刻的印象。时隔两年,已经上了大学的她携新作归来,描写的生活虽然变了,但优点依然闪光。这篇文章通过一台空调的眼睛记录下一个宿舍的女孩们一天的生活。从清晨小小的摩擦到白天忙碌的生活,再到夜晚,大家尽释前嫌一同吃火锅。这样平凡的一日,却透过字里行间反射出不平凡的光彩来。
Zi said: Zhao Kai Xin’s article has always been to win the truth and details. In the Eleventh Dancing Composition Contest, her “next door” impressed the reader with a detailed description of the details of her life and the inner workings of her characters. After a lapse of two years, she has returned to college with her new work, although the description of life has changed, but the advantages are still flashing. This article records the daily life of a girl in a dormitory through an air-conditioned eye. From the small friction in the early morning to the busy life during the day and then to the night, we all tried to release the hotpot before releasing it. Such an ordinary day, but through the lines reflected between the extraordinary glory.