我们以前接触过很多写记游表达情思的文章,多是记述沿途风光,本组两篇文章有所不同,在“行走”中略写自然景物,更多的是挖掘景物中蕴涵的历史文化内涵,突出浓郁的文化氛围,给我们以文化熏陶和生命启示。人杰精英,再写镇上的顾家宅第论屋舍的阔大、花园的精巧和陈设的豪出作者心中的思想明灯顾炎武,思路清晰,衬托、对比手法尽显妙用。《谒孟母林》,列举孟母教子的具体事例,写出了孟母的伟大,并由孟母写到自己的母亲乃至天下的母亲,立意深远。写记游类散文,关键是要进行细心的观察和深入的思考,要特别注意观察顺序、取舍详略和情景融合,这两篇可说是典范,同学们可以细细品味。(可可) We used to touch a lot of writing travel express feelings of the article, mostly describing the scenery along the way, the two articles in this group are different, in “walking ” in a slightly omitted natural scenery, more is to tap the historical culture implied in the history Connotation, highlighting the rich cultural atmosphere, give us cultural influence and life inspiration. Renjiejie elite, and then write the town of Gu Family House on the vast house, the garden’s sophistication and furnishings of the author of the minds of the bright lights Gu Yanwu, clear thinking, set off, the contrast technique to make full use of. “Meng Meng Lin”, citing the specific case of the mother of the grandson of Mother Meng, wrote the great mother of Meng, Meng mother wrote to his mother and the world’s mother, the concept of far-reaching. Writing essays written class, the key is to be careful observation and in-depth thinking, pay special attention to observe the order, the choice of a more detailed and scene fusion, these two can be described as a model, students can savor. (cocoa)