要把动作描写细致,最佳方法是把动作过程以“慢镜头”状态进行分解,追踪动作的轨迹或历程。仔细揣摩,所有人的所有动作都有做前的准备、动作的实施过程和动作完成后动作对象状态的变化。我们把动作按照这三步进行分解,动作就有了细节。如“跳”这个动作描写:“跳”之前:欲上先下,脚尖点地,脚腰紧绷,后跟高高翘起,腿部以膝盖为支点,小腿和大腿折叠,上身微微前倾,双手半握拳状,双臂弓于躯体两侧,前额低垂,眼睛凝视前方,紧紧憋住呼吸。“跳”之时:脚尖用力一点,双臂突然向前,折叠的 To describe the action detail, the best way is to decompose the action process to “slow motion” state, tracking the trajectory or course of action. Carefully try to figure out that all the actions of all people have to do before the preparation, the implementation of the action process and action after the completion of action objects state changes. We decompose the action according to these three steps, the action has the detail. Such as “jump ” before the action description: “jump ” before: want to go first, toe point, tight feet, followed by high tilt, legs to knees as the fulcrum, calf and thigh fold, upper body Slightly leaning forward, his hands half-clenched, his arms bow on both sides of the body, his forehead drooping, his eyes staring forward, hold his breath tightly. “Jump ” when: tiptoe a little hard, his arms suddenly forward, folded