在《读者》上看到一个故事:父亲是作家,儿子却最怵作文,教师认为这学生的表达有问题。为了挽救这位学困生,教师找来班上同学的作文,让他学习、模仿。父亲看了这些“优秀作文”心中大喜,对儿子说:“这些作文写得一点儿也不好。开头一段排比,堆砌辞藻;中间又是引用名人名言;到了结尾,为赋新词强说愁,自己的话一句也没有。你得庆幸自己没写成这样!”正如这位作家所言,近几年,有些小学生习作看上去语言华丽、文字 Read a story on Reader: The father is a writer, the son is the most essay, and the teacher thinks there is a problem with the student’s expression. In order to save the student who was poor student, the teacher found his classmate’s composition, let him learn and imitate. The father read these “good writing ” hearts rejoicing, said to his son: “these essays are not good at all .At the beginning of a row of lines, pondering the rhetoric; the middle is quoted celebrity quotes; Strongly worry, his words are not .. You have fortunate that they did not write this! ”As the writer said, in recent years, some primary school students look gorgeous language, writing