编者推荐：从两个层面上写“放弃”：“他张开怀抱,我跳了出来”和“抱住他的身体,可他张开怀抱”,二者相得益彰。前者为后者铺垫,后者在前者的基础上升华文旨。但是,此文还需要升格：减少有关议论,其意用记叙出之；第一自然段的议论,宜用来写“花糖纸”的心理活动。标题改为“一张花糖纸的境遇”。 Editor’s recommendation: Write “abandon” on two levels: “He opened his arms, I jumped out” and “Hold his body, but he opened his arms.” Both complement each other. The former paves the way for the latter, while the latter raises the Chinese purpose on the basis of the former. However, this article also needs to be upgraded: to reduce the relevant arguments, its narratives should be used for narrative; the first paragraph of natural argument should be used to write the psychological activities of “flower candy”. The title was changed to “The situation of a flower candy.”