这是一篇杂志社小记者的手写稿。读完文章之前的信件部分,我就被她那种对文字的十足热忱所感动了。通读完毕,对于文稿的优劣,我想先不判断,因为这篇文稿有许多当下中学生写作中的共同性问题,我试着做一些分析,大家可结合自己 This is a handwritten manuscript written by a magazine journalist. After reading the letter before the article, I was touched by her full enthusiasm for writing. After reading through it, I would like to make no judgment on the merits of the manuscript because the manuscript contains many common problems in the writing of middle school students. I try to do some analysis and everyone can combine