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(一)刘恒点评:段桂范同学临摹的《散氏盘铭文》下笔轻松,行笔流畅,对字形体势的把握也比较准确,具有一定的基础和书写经验。欲求进一步提高,可在以下方面加以改进努力:首先,用笔需要稍加凝重厚实,起笔收笔需应从容不迫,特别是收笔要稳一些,送笔要到位,不宜匆忙;其次,在结字上还要再准确精到,尤其应当弄清楚原字的结构,作业中两个『道』字及第二行最下面一字在结构上都不准。
(A) Liu Heng Comments: Duan Guifan students copy “Inscriptions of the Pan’s” easy pen, smooth lines, grasping the potential of the shape is relatively accurate, with some basic and writing experience. Desire to further improve, can be improved in the following areas: First of all, with a pen need a little thicker, pen and pen should be calm, especially to close the pen to be steady, send pen to be in place, not in a hurry; Second, In particular, the structure of the original words should be clarified. The two “道” characters in the homework and the word at the bottom of the second line are not structurally correct.