由于特殊的教学机制与考核背景,学生基本上以“非我”的面目出现在作文世界里,这种“非我”的面目使得学生在作文世界里渐渐地失落了真人真事、真情真话、真体验和真感受,也失去了对写作的本真需求。教师应努力建构“生本”的写作教学模式,努力从学生的实际出发,关注学生的真实情感,从而让写作成为学生们的真实需要。 Due to the special teaching mechanism and examination background, the students basically appear in the composition world with “non-me ” appearance, which makes the students gradually lose their real life story in the composition world , The true truth, true experience and true feelings, but also lost the true needs of the writing. Teachers should make great efforts to construct a writing teaching mode of “students ”, try their best to pay attention to students ’real emotion from the reality of students, and make writing become the real needs of students.