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I’m Gina. I like go1 to a movie on weekends, and I also like basketball. My favorite is play2 piano3 for the reason that it is very graceful(优美). Now I’m in the piano club. There are many classmates there. We learn it from each other. Sometimes they teach I4. Sometimes I teach them. We learn it happily. Please soon join us5.
评语:本篇通过介绍自己的爱好——弹钢琴，号召其他同学都加入钢琴俱乐部，文章条理清晰，语言简洁。
1. like doing sth.表示习惯性的喜爱做某事，即go应改为going。
2. be后接宾语play要用动名词也就是v-ing形式，即playing。
3. 若指打球，则play后直接加球类名词，为固定搭配,但是表示弹奏乐器，play后要加定冠词the再加乐器名。例如：play the guitar。
4. teach是实义动词，在句中作谓语成份，其后接宾语，人称代词要用其相应的宾格形式，即me。
5. “赶快加入吧”, join us soon, soon 不久的将来，在此作时间状语，位于句尾。
My Hobby
I’m Gina. I like going to a movie on weekends and I also like basketball. My favorite is playing the piano for the reason that it’s very graceful. Now I’m in the piano club. There are many classmates there. We learn it from each other. Sometimes they teach me. Sometimes I teach them. We learn it happily. Please join us soon.
指导老师：张云昊
评语:本篇通过介绍自己的爱好——弹钢琴，号召其他同学都加入钢琴俱乐部，文章条理清晰，语言简洁。
1. like doing sth.表示习惯性的喜爱做某事，即go应改为going。
2. be后接宾语play要用动名词也就是v-ing形式，即playing。
3. 若指打球，则play后直接加球类名词，为固定搭配,但是表示弹奏乐器，play后要加定冠词the再加乐器名。例如：play the guitar。
4. teach是实义动词，在句中作谓语成份，其后接宾语，人称代词要用其相应的宾格形式，即me。
5. “赶快加入吧”, join us soon, soon 不久的将来，在此作时间状语，位于句尾。
My Hobby
I’m Gina. I like going to a movie on weekends and I also like basketball. My favorite is playing the piano for the reason that it’s very graceful. Now I’m in the piano club. There are many classmates there. We learn it from each other. Sometimes they teach me. Sometimes I teach them. We learn it happily. Please join us soon.
指导老师：张云昊