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★评委意见:出彩的作文,立意是拒绝平庸的。小作者以自己学习古筝的亲身经历,升华出一个高远、积极的主旨,给人心智的启迪。感情真挚,一切如从小作者的心灵潺潺流淌而出;行文跌宕,仿佛一朵茉莉花摇曳在风中;语言凝练,有很多富有哲理的句子,使习作富有文采。读后,我们感悟到一种学习的乐趣,一种学习的怡情。(郑清芬)
★ judges comments: a color of the composition, the intention is to refuse mediocrity. Small author to learn their own experience of guzheng, sublimation out of a lofty, positive theme, giving the inspiration of the mind. Feelings of sincerity, everything is as small as the author’s gurgling flowing out; the text ups and downs, as if a jasmine swaying in the wind; concise language, there are many philosophical sentences, making writing rich literary talent. After reading, we realize a kind of learning pleasure, a learning pleasure. (Cheng Ching-fen)