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古人写文章历来有“凤头豹尾”之说,那怎样才能使结尾收束漂亮,给读者最后的惊喜呢?笔者以为,不妨采用以下收束方式。水到渠成式满分作文《东坡的选择》开头先以简要几笔,就勾勒了一个迷茫的环境与东坡落魄的身影,景情相融,人物形象呼之欲出。二段一反上文的迷茫,勾勒了一幅境界宽阔、气势苍莽的意境,令人心神为之振奋。三段以下进入《赤壁赋》中的情景。“而今夜,我又来了,带着朋友,驾着扁舟,抱着美酒。”诗意弥漫的几句,将读者带入了千年前的那一场主客对话中。接下以洞箫带出苏轼的一生,用笔简约。最后二段,文章水到渠成,情景合而为一,物我一境,主旨得以升华,并点出苏轼心灵的选择。
The ancients wrote articles that have always said “Crested Leopard Tail”, then how can we make the end of the collection beautiful and give readers the final surprise? I believe that may wish to adopt the following way of convergence. The perfect composition of “Dongpo’s Choice” begins with a few brief strokes. It outlines a confused environment and the desolate figure of the Dongpo. In the second paragraph, contrary to the above confusion, the outline of a broad and imposing atmosphere was sketched out, which made people excited. Below three paragraphs into the “Red Cliff” scene. “Tonight, I came again, took my friends, drove my boat, and held the fine wine.” A few words filled with poetry brought the reader to the dialogue of host and guest that was thousands of years ago. Take the hole out of Su Shi’s life, using a simple pen. In the last two paragraphs, the article will come to fruition, the situation will be one, and the subject will be sublimated and the Su Shi’s soul will be chosen.