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两份作文让我久久不能释怀（见附件）。它们是深圳市２００１年５月高考模拟统一考试作文试卷。两份作文得分的差异不算小：一份５４分，是一类插标文；一份２０分，显然是四类不及格文。这２０分的四类文毛病究竟出在哪里？批卷老师认为该文“偏离题意”。那么，这篇文章是否
Two essays kept me for a long time (see attachment). They are the essay papers for the May 2001 college entrance examination simulation unified examination. The difference between the scores of the two compositions is not small: a score of 54 is a type of insert; a score of 20 is obviously four types of failing. Where are these four categories of 20-point illness? The batch teacher thinks the article “deviates from the meaning of the question.” So, is this article